Good. Very, very good. You created a suffucating sense of inevitable death over the whole clan, and not naming Angel, seeing him only through the eyes of the Tyrrell clan, is the best version I've seen written so far, and the most terrifying.
It's amazing to me that they couldn't recognize the evil he was, the awful things he did, just because he wore a collar. Just proves that faith can be too blind at times.
Poor Dru.