Adored what you did here, sketching each relationship, each characteristic of the women through the way they kissed, the way Angel's body reacted to each one. Just a gorgeous idea. She cannot possibly know that Angel’s kisses are his soul’s expression: he claims with them, brands with them, surrenders with them. Wow. So very powerful. And beautifully written too.
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Date: 2006-01-17 09:29 am (UTC)She cannot possibly know that Angel’s kisses are his soul’s expression: he claims with them, brands with them, surrenders with them.
Wow. So very powerful. And beautifully written too.